Michigan v. Indiana Preview

[MasterfulMindofMitch]

http://thevictorsreport.blogspot.com/2013/10/michigan-v-indiana-preview.html

Preview of the Michigan v. Indiana game this Saturday at the Big House.

 

[TheVictors]

Proofread young brother Mitch, proofread.

Coaching was poor, players played poorly ....

Subjunctive "were"


Read your writing aloud to yourself and think about pace and tempo and how the sentences flow.

Keep writing.

 

[b311j]

The _________ have a fast and high scoring offense led by quarterback _______ who has thrown for over 1,600 yards and 13 touchdowns. The glaring issue with this ________ team is its major lack of defense as they are giving up almost 33 points a game which ranks 101st in the nation. The ________ rely on out scoring a team over stopping them.

This sounds a tad familiar.......

 

[MasterfulMindofMitch]

Thanks guys for critiques, I truly appreciate it and used it my next blog!

 

[TheVictors]

Keep writing ...

Byco is a bonafied journalist and Tinsel is a Hollywood screen writer. i've done some writing as have others here -- it's always a work in progress.

 

[hungry]

Most of us learned how to write in the 2nd grade and most of have moved on to bigger and better things

(close to a quote from Bobby Knight)